Sunday, September 22, 2013

My Second Revision Discussion Text


Is Social Network Good or Bad?
            Time by time the technology be more higher. The high technology always gives us easier to do our activities. For example, communication, nowadays we don’t need  cell phone , we can use internet. There are many ways to communicate by using Internet. One of them is Social Network. Most people include Indonesia use Social Network. We can get the benefits by Social Network but it can also be dangerous for us.
            In fact, by using Social Network connnect us to other countries so that we can have many friends. We can share our feelings to everyone what just happened to our selves. We can send our picture, videos and others. In addition, we will know what the trending topic today or what the latest style today. It means we will not leave behind by using Social Network.
            On the other hand, Social Network also gives us disadvantages and be dangerous. Someone who doesn’t manage his or her time, he/she will spend whole of his/her time in front of his/her personal computer for browsing Social Network. It means he/she won’t care about his/her daily activities for example eat, pray, and more important is his/her study. Futhermore, nowadays there are many crime occurs because of Social  Network. Deception and Kidnapping are two examples of Social Network. The numbers of victims increase year by year. .
            In conclusion,I will not tell where I stand between two arguments .It is okay to use Social Network. We can get some advantages because of those. For those points Social Network is good, but it can be bad for us if we use not wisely. There are many disadvantages of Social Network especially for kids. Here I suggest if we use Social Network, we have to use wisely and smartly and slso remember about the risk.            

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