My Experience in Writing 1
When I started second semester. I had a subject named writing 1. Writing 1was taught by Mr.Hafidg and Mr. Refnaldi. In writing 1 I learned about cause and effect paragraph, comparison, and contrast
and others.
I learned writing in the morning and in the day so I felt sleepy most of time. Writing I teach me how writing well. I have to improve my skill, develop my idea. I have difficult to develop my idea and use the exatcly words. I don't know why. May be I am lazy to reading a book or something else in English
Study with Mr.Hafidh and Mr.Refnaldi is so fun for me. However, there's a challenge for me. I can't stand with my sleepy, feel hungry.
I like your story,but I'm confuse with paragraph 1. You should to check again your story. I found some wrong like :
ReplyDeleteMr.hafidg must be Mr. hafiz
writing 1was must be writing 1 was
i agree with you anita..
Deletewriting makes me sleepy and feel hungry too..