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          Review Text about Movie

Hafalan Surat Delisha

Directed               :Sony Gaokasak

Produser             :Chand Parwez Servia

Writter                 :Armantono

Starring                :Nirina Zubir

                                Reza Rahadian

                                Chantiq Schagerl

                                Al Fathir Muchtar

                                Mike Lewis

                                Loide Christina Teixeira

                                Ghina Salsabila

                                Reska Tania Apriadi

                                Riska Tania Apriadi

Distributor          :Kharisma Starvision Plus

The date of

publication          :22 Desember 2011

Duration              :150 menit

Country               :Indonesia

               

               

               

Synopsis

                The movie tell us about there is a daughter named Delisha,6, who lives with a complete family. Delisha tried harder to memorize her reading prayers. Because she really wants to get a gold necklace that is promised by her mother. On 26th December, 2004, in her school, she is trying to memorize the reading prayers, her mother is watching on her. Suddenly, Tsunami is coming, Delisa and her mother separate each other. 6 days later, Delisa is found by Americans soldier that is stuck on the branch of the white flowers about 4 km away from her school. The body full of injured, the foot coverd by blood,hotness, she desn’t wake up yet. She is taken by helicopter John F Kennedy. She desn’t know that her twin sisters and old sister are death include her mother. Everything around there are smashed by Tsunami. She loss her house. Her father is still far away in the middle of the sea Canada. She is sompletely alone there. Moreover, she can’t memorize her reading prayers. A few days later, Delisa meets her father and she is sad so much when heards about her family news. But, she gets up, in her sadness. She is a little angel that shares a lot of laughing around there. She teach that her sadness is her power to get up. Although her tears won’t to stop, but she tries learn how to be sincere.

            Every scenes in this movie are very touchingful. Chantiq Schagerl as Delisa has good acting. This religious situation is taken well. The viewer will feel how the situation because this movie uses high technology. The Tsunami looks real in this movie so the viewer can feel the situation. In addition, this movie is good for watching by all of ages, especially kids and teenagers. This movie has many moral value that we should apply. It teach us to be sronger whatever happens in ourlifes. And the touching moment that still remember is when Delisa says” Delisa cinta ayah karena Allah”  

            Of course, this movie also has weakness. First, this movie uses Indonesian language and little byte English not the originall Acehnesss. Second, the place is taken scene that not in Aceh. This movie take place in somewhere else. And the last one, although the movie uses high technology, but it still look blur in the scene.

            I suggest the movie will be better if it uses the real Aceh language.  So the situation in the movie will feel more. And what better the place to take scene should in Aceh.

                    

           

My Second Revision Discussion Text

Is Social Network Good or Bad?

            Time by time the technology be more higher. The high technology always gives us easier to do our activities. For example, communication, nowadays we don’t need  cell phone , we can use internet. There are many ways to communicate by using Internet. One of them is Social Network. Most people include Indonesia use Social Network. We can get the benefits by Social Network but it can also be dangerous for us.

            In fact, by using Social Network connnect us to other countries so that we can have many friends. We can share our feelings to everyone what just happened to our selves. We can send our picture, videos and others. In addition, we will know what the trending topic today or what the latest style today. It means we will not leave behind by using Social Network.

            On the other hand, Social Network also gives us disadvantages and be dangerous. Someone who doesn’t manage his or her time, he/she will spend whole of his/her time in front of his/her personal computer for browsing Social Network. It means he/she won’t care about his/her daily activities for example eat, pray, and more important is his/her study. Futhermore, nowadays there are many crime occurs because of Social  Network. Deception and Kidnapping are two examples of Social Network. The numbers of victims increase year by year. .

            In conclusion,I will not tell where I stand between two arguments .It is okay to use Social Network. We can get some advantages because of those. For those points Social Network is good, but it can be bad for us if we use not wisely. There are many disadvantages of Social Network especially for kids. Here I suggest if we use Social Network, we have to use wisely and smartly and slso remember about the risk.            

My wishes in Writing 2

Well, I hope this semester in Writing 2, I can write better. I use my grammar correctly. I hope, I feel fun in Writing 2 and then I get a good mark, I understand how to write well. It's important to me, I hope I can make a book or something else by Writing for example comics, poetry, song, or novel. if I past Writing 2, I can continue to Writing 3.   

my experience

My Experience in Writing 1

When I started second semester. I had a subject named writing 1. Writing 1was taught by Mr.Hafidg and Mr. Refnaldi. In writing 1 I learned about cause and effect paragraph, comparison, and contrast    

and others.

I learned writing in the morning and in the day so I felt sleepy most of time. Writing I teach me how writing well. I have to improve my skill, develop my idea. I have difficult to develop my idea and use the exatcly words. I don't know why. May be I am lazy to reading a book or something else in English

Study with Mr.Hafidh and Mr.Refnaldi is so fun for me. However, there's a challenge for me. I can't stand with my sleepy, feel hungry.      

NARRATIVE TEXT

A Beauty and A Singing Beggar

            Once upon time there was a girl who had beautiful face named Beauty. She lived with her parents. She was the only child of her parents. Her father was a king in that city. She was always taught to be a good princess by her mom. The Beauty liked sang and danced so much. She had   a beautiful voice. She sang whenever she felt sad or happy. However, The Beauty’s life was not safe because there was a witch who wanted her beauty. That’s why Beauty’s parents didn’t allow the Beauty to go outside. They were afraid the witch would catch her. T he Beauty didn’t believe about that.

            One day Beauty was bored. She went outside without her parents’ permission. She went to the market. She found some things new in that area. She saw seller, waiter, and many others. She just knew about the market. Then her sight was interested to something. She saw a singing beggar. There were two mens. One of them rapped and the other men did beat. She went to there and kept watching to them. She was glad to see that so, she joined them by singing and dancing. A few minutes later,Beauty asked about their name. Their name were John and Beat. They had good talking each other. The Beauty impressed to the Beat and Beat too.

            Suddenly , there was a old lady that catched the Beauty. There was a witch. John and Beat tried to help her but they couldn’t because the witch was very fast. They knew where the witch go. The witch went to her house where in the forest. The witch laid down the Beauty. She took blood and fingernail of the Beauty. The Beauty cried for asking help and she felt tired. The Beauty collapsed. The witch was able to take the beauty of The Beauty.

             Meanwhile Beauty’s parents were worry about her daughter. They asked servants to found Beauty. The Witch wanted to kill Beauty but they were coming. John tried to kill the Witch and Beat took the Beauty. John got hurt in his chest but he could kill the Witch. John and Beat went away from that place. After that, they met the servants. The servants catched John and Beat because they thought John and Beat catched the Beauty.

            In the castle, Beauty’s parents cured the Beauty. Then the Beauty woke up.  She told what just happen to her and she told that John and Beat saved her. Beauty’s parents didn’t believe about John and Beat. They persuade his daughter not to meet them anymore. A few days later, the Beauty tried to make them free. She didn’t care about the servants who kept them. She took knife. If there was anybody to prevent her, she would kill them. The Beauty met John and Beat and saved them. They escaped from that castle included the Beauty. However Beauty’s mom knew about that. The Beauty didn’t get away from John and Beat. She would kill anybody who prevent her. In the end, Beauty’s mom allowed her daughter to meet them.

            Some month laters, John went to a city where met his parents lived. Beauty and Beat spent time together. They sang and dance everytime they met. Beat became famous and Beauty became a singer and a princess too. They falt in love each other. They got married and lived forever after.